Aahh, I know what you mean about first person present tense. It drives me insane. I used to write first person constantly-- all my older stories are done that way-- but I completely lost any ability to do it during high school. I much prefer third person in various tenses. Eh, oh well.

Honey Trap. *pets it giddily* I'm making a review of this as I type this.

Hah! I have to admit, the fluffy Crawford/Aya fiction makes me happy. Because... well, I'm irrationally attracted to fluffy things, even if I'm an angst-lover at heart. And it doesn't get much more absurdly fluffy than Crawford/Aya being cute and cooking. (Why are they always cooking?) This being said, giggling your entire way through a fic just because the fluff is overpowering your brain says nothing about the pairing. XD

Anyway. OCs... make me flinch. Which is why I was so delighted that you write them so well in your works-- I could never pull it off, it says so much about your ability as a writer to do so. I don't even mind Moth, whereas most of the time I'd detest her kind of character. And I *love* your bad guys. Oh yes.

And now I'm off to fangirl more over you. *cheerfully* Thanks so much for listening to my babble! Have a wonderful day! *hug*