ext_49797 ([identity profile] skyrat13.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sevendials 2005-05-12 04:45 am (UTC)

hiya. I just stumbled here by accident because I tried reviewing one of your fics but my computer is being retarded tonight and wouldn't let the pop-up work. I know from experience that when I put off reviewing something till later, I never remember, I have to review right after reading or there's no point. So I just thought I'd drop you a line here so you know I liked your story. Anyways, I just read the three-part yohji/ken story that followed the kapital timeline. I really enjoyed it. It's really nice getting a story where the characters are allowed an realistic slow progression to come to terms with their feelings, that sort of thing is way too rushed in most fics, I like how you split it up into three parts and real time passed in between them. Secondly, I personally tend to get rather hung up on exploring their pasts with Kase and Asuka, and it's rare to get a story that doesn't paint Kase as strictly a one-dimensional evil bastard. So I really liked how you handled that. I tend to see an awful lot of Yuriko/Asuka/Kase-bashing out there and it's really nice to get a story that acknowledges their importance. Well anyway, I'm too tired to be entirely coherent right now, I meant to read just one fic tonight and ended up reading three, heh. Ciao.

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